A/N: Hello! If you're reading this, I'm looking for feedback, critique and comments on storywriting, like pace, tone, enjoyment. I haven't written in a long time and it's been more than a year since I'd done something for LotRO RP, and decided to pen up a multi-part story on this character's current plotline, so that I can get back into the habit of writing and improve my storytelling skills.
Any feedback I get is very very appreciated! It would help me a lot towards getting back into the flow of things!
Alekay: "Wouldn't say love, but definitely tha' feelin' of attraction and care, somethin' precious."
[Pause] Alekay: "I am absolutely sorry if I jus' hit you with that like a ton o' bricks."
[Perlene blinks at him and laughs.] Perlene:"Oi' ye know I'm fond of ye, silly."
(Many thanks to Priya for the idea and letting me use it, and to all the role-players whose characters are a part of Alex's life and influenced it.)
After a particularly messy scene involving an ambush by a trio of bandits, Aureliyn and Alex stand in front of a small stream and next to a small pile of ashes.